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| Your School's Name: Tonbridge Grammar for Girls | MY URL: Visit Me |
| My Email: Email Me | Your Name: Coralie |
| Poet's Name (if not yourself) Me | |
| Any comments about why you wrote it? It was inspired by on going love feuds amongst my friendship group at the time !!! |
Your Poem:
Heartbreaker,
User,
I can't believe you do it,
All the love you could have had,
Sweetest girl ever,
Use her,
Break her heart,
She doesn't love you anymore,
But she still aches,
Do you love her?
Your hard outer shell ,
Inside is a mess,
Get a 'quack' heart breaker,
User,
And where has her love gone,
Banished forever,
Deeply disturbed,
Can she love again?
Is she a mess like you?
Or still the same?
A piece is missing;
No naivety,
Simplicity,
The scepticism sets in now,
And as I read this ,as it unfolds,
Tears prick my eyes,
But she doesn't cry,
Maybe she is stronger than you,
I hope you are crying,
Heartbreaker,
User,
You should hold her forever,
Or put her in a glass case,
Where no-one would ever hurt her,
And if you ever hurt her,
Hurt you so many times more,
You are so lucky to have her,
Oblivious to your callousness,
Locked in your own perfect world
Can't believe you do it ,
Heartbreaker,
User.
She is too good for you,
But so in love,
She has given all she has to you,
And you give only hurt back,
You just don't understand,
Your head's so full of you,
Bloated beyond repair ,
You aren't even bothered,
Until you notice she is packing her things,
You realise without her you're nothing,
A heartbreaker,
A user,
You beg her to stay-the same old story,
You expect her to say-you'll have one last chance,
But she'll just ignore you,
And why the hell not,
She'll walk out just crying and shaking her head,
She's taken pity so many times,
Chances and chances you've had,
But your time has run out and she's going away,
The heartbreaker heartbroken
The user better off dead.
| Your School's Name: Tonbridge Grammar for Girls | MY URL: Visit Me |
| My Email: Email Me | Your Name: Coralie |
| Poet's Name (if not yourself) Me | |
| Any comments about why you wrote it? It was inspired by on going love feuds amongst my friendship group at the time !!! |
Your Poem:
Heartbreaker,
User,
I can't believe you do it,
All the love you could have had,
Sweetest girl ever,
Use her,
Break her heart,
She doesn't love you anymore,
But she still aches,
Do you love her?
Your hard outer shell ,
Inside is a mess,
Get a 'quack' heart breaker,
User,
And where has her love gone,
Banished forever,
Deeply disturbed,
Can she love again?
Is she a mess like you?
Or still the same?
A piece is missing;
No naivety,
Simplicity,
The scepticism sets in now,
And as I read this ,as it unfolds,
Tears prick my eyes,
But she doesn't cry,
Maybe she is stronger than you,
I hope you are crying,
Heartbreaker,
User,
You should hold her forever,
Or put her in a glass case,
Where no-one would ever hurt her,
And if you ever hurt her,
Hurt you so many times more,
You are so lucky to have her,
Oblivious to your callousness,
Locked in your own perfect world
Can't believe you do it ,
Heartbreaker,
User.
She is too good for you,
But so in love,
She has given all she has to you,
And you give only hurt back,
You just don't understand,
Your head's so full of you,
Bloated beyond repair ,
You aren't even bothered,
Until you notice she is packing her things,
You realise without her you're nothing,
A heartbreaker,
A user,
You beg her to stay-the same old story,
You expect her to say-you'll have one last chance,
But she'll just ignore you,
And why the hell not,
She'll walk out just crying and shaking her head,
She's taken pity so many times,
Chances and chances you've had,
But your time has run out and she's going away,
The heartbreaker heartbroken
The user better off dead.
Do whatever keeps you happy, consider other people. But don't ever live your life in pain So as not to upset them.
| Your School's Name: | MY URL: Visit Me |
| My Email: Email Me | Your Name: Barry Foster |
| Poet's Name (if not yourself) | |
| Any comments about why you wrote it? |
Your Poem:
Too good for me.
And I know I shouldn’t say it, but its how I feel
And I know I shouldn’t feel it, but its how I was made.
And how you were made
Is different
To how I was made
And its because you were made different to me,
That we can only be friends
And that’s all we will ever be
Although they try to say
That we are all made the same
I know that you’re too good for me
| Your School's Name: Bill |
| MY URL: Visit Me |
| Your Name: Lismore |
| Poet's Name (if not yourself) |
| Any comments about why you wrote it? |
Your Poem:
I walk unclean and unshaven
My thoughts penitrate these suroundings
With a clarity and a cohesion
I am touched in places
seldom touched before
Like the reunion of two old friends
Excited and at ease in each others company
What were the forces that caused our separation
They were strong, remain unknown and
they will return.