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you need to get out more
you'd scare billy if he read that.
you really should go out and get a boyfriend. or some friends. or some source of life.
you are very sad indeed. is this all you can do, sit around writing crap poems about a guy whos got a girlfriend and you wouldnt have any chance whatsoever with? ok yeah a girls aloud to have her dreams and whatever, but this is just OTT. it's disgusting in fact. billy's not like that at all, and if you think writing shit like this will improve your chances of getting with him. then i think you're even more disturbed.
look girl just get some dignity. loads of girls love billy including me, but scaring the shit out of him and writing crappy little poems like this doesnt make you love him more than anyone else. and he HAS A GIRLFRIEND. and as much as you write poems about 'what his girlfriend doesnt know wont hurt' it just WONT happen my dear.
so please, get some dignity and a boyfriend.
cheers
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You should be dead. As dead as the English you have murdered in your scribblings.
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Okay.. I don't like to be mean. So I am gonna try and make this sound as nice as possible.
Billy, has a girlfriend. Those poems, would A:Probably scare the shit outta him, and make him unable to sleep for days after reading them. or B: Make him laugh his ass of at them, because of the stuff you put in them.
I can't say that you are a good writer, because I don't like to read poems, about getting into Billy's pants, or about sex anyway. It's just... EW! Also, I don't know how old you are.. But if you were say...15 or so.. Not the age of 18.. you could get Billy into trouble. Him with a minor. But I doubt that would actually happen. Because he has his girl.
Also, I am not going to call you a teenie. Because I don't know you. All I am going to say, is that in your poems, you sound like one. Wanting to get into Billy's pants. I am a fan of Billy's, and I LOVE the band to death. But I wouldn't be that desperate. But I guess I'll take my leave. If you want, you can e-mail me, and voice your opinions back. But just to let you know,I'm not trying to be mean. Just stating a few things.
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You need professional help. You are obsessed with Billy to an unhelathy degree.
Secondly, your poetry is pretty damn generic, and contains way too many cliches. You should try to spice it up with a lot more originality. You have potential, but damn you keep writing the same damn poem over and over again!